RT info:eu-repo/semantics/article T1 How to report writing interventions? A case study on the analytic description of two effective revision interventions A1 Fidalgo Redondo, Raquel A1 López Gutiérrez, Paula A2 Psicologia Evolutiva y de la Educacion K1 Educación K1 Design principles K1 Revision instruction K1 Learning activities K1 Strategy-focused instruction K1 Reader-focused instruction AB In this study we present a comparative report of two effective instructional programs focused on the improvement of upper-primary students' writing competence through the promotion of revision skills. Both programs shared the main aim but had two different approaches. We contrasted writer-focused instruction with reader-focused instruction. To provide a valid report on the similarities and differences of the two programs, we applied two complementary dimensions. The first dimension, what the researcher intends students to achieve, provides insight into the types of students' intermediate learning objectives and how they are sequenced. The second dimension, how to teach, includes the instructional design principles which relate the intermediate learning objectives to the specific learning and instructional activities in certain conditions. We analyse similarities and differences between the instructional programs and discuss the implications of using this kind of reporting system as a useful tool for reporting - and designing - writing interventions PB University of Antwerp. Belgium SN 2030-1006 LK http://hdl.handle.net/10612/14969 UL http://hdl.handle.net/10612/14969 NO p. 279-329 DS BULERIA. Repositorio Institucional de la Universidad de León RD 19-may-2024